Raindrop

I am small
Quicksilver
My life began high in the clouds
I started tiny
Then, as I grew larger and larger
With all my brothers and sisters
The cloud could no longer hold us
And we fell
Miles and Miles
Soon I see and unfamiliar thing
It is not the grey-blue I am accustomed to
It is the colour of the sun
I land on it, still in the sky, but on the Sun Patch
Now I roll off, and fall into a puddle.
I am one


So i wrote that as a school assignment a while ago, tell me what you think, and be honest!!!!!